Two weeks after Pt. 4:
Luciana opened the mailbox and sifted through the mail, her thoughts drifting to Ella. Her memory was okay, but if she exhibited any more memory loss, she would miss school for the first semester.
Suddenly, her eyes saw the last letter in the stack of mail. It was from The New York School of Astornomy and Astrounout Training! (Reality Note; Luciana calls it NYSAAT (nee-sat) for short). She hurriedly opened it and skimmed.
When she finished, she ran inside screaming, "I'm In, I'm In!!!!!!" so loud that Mami and Papi thought something was wrong.
"Nothing's wrong! But I've been accepted into the school!" she screamed!
"Oh, Luciana that is incredible! We'll have to throw you another party!" Isadora squealed. Luciana laughed, picked her sister up, and swung her around the living room.
"I've got to call my friends!" Luciana said, then opened her cell phone. Her cousins had gone back to Chile, and all her friends had gone home soon after. Ella was still in the hospital, and Clair stayed with her because Ella's parents were on a trip and unreachable by phone or mail. So she would have to ask Clair if Ella's memory was okay enough that she could spill the news.
After the calls to her cousins and friends, she called Clair's number. When she heard Clair say, "Hey, girl, what up?" she screamed, "I was accepted into my dream school, that's what up!" "Oh, my goodness, Luci. I am so happy for you," Clair said. "How's Ella?" Luciana asked.
"Actually, I have news, too. Ella is all better she remembers everything, and the doctors say there's only a 3.48 % chance that she would lose it again. Want me to put her on?" Clair said. "Is the sun a ginormous star? Duh!" Luciana said. In a couple seconds, Luciana heard Ella's voice on the line. "Hey. Clair told me about school. Now we'll both live out our dreams. And I'll have to plan another party," she said.
"Thanks for planning the first one. And I'm really glad you feel better," Luciana said.
They talked for a while, then hung up, and Luciana went to bed feeling happier than she had in a long time.
So that's the end. I'm probably going to post an epilogue.
Thanks for Reading, Bye! 😀
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What a heartwarming and triumphant ending to Luciana's grown-up story. It's a great reminder that pokedoku dreams do come true, and the bonds of friendship endure.
This seems good. Maybe you could publish the whole story in one big post to make it easier for people who stumble upon it to read all of it. Also, there are tow nitpicks I have, One is that the bump on Ella's head would be referred to in much more academic language, and the other is that the percentage that she would lose her memory that the doctor told her would not so exact as to have decimals.